First critique, but here it goes. Firstly I must say this is an astounding peice don't get me wrong. But it fails in comparisan to your other works. Vision looks pretty good all around. Orginality not so original. Just another space thing. Technique... I have no idea what that even means. Impact is the same as originality. It just doesn't catch my eye i'm affraid. I hope you found this fair. Um I don't know what else to write for the hundred word minimum, so here is a bunch of random words. bwd uwbdw yoaydw dyd. Ok there we go.