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Mutated by GrahamSym Mutated by GrahamSym
Copyright 2013 Graham Symmons
Raw fractal created using Mandelbulb3D v1.8.9 by Jesse www.fractalforums.com/index.ph… No postwork.

Created for :iconspirals-and-swirls: contest fav.me/d6k85x9
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I think the piece is great as a base for a larger piece of work. Honestly, the background is so blah that it takes away from the detail and drama of the construct. If you were to generate maybe an industrial/steampunk background or even something Skyrim/LOTR I think it would really complement the work.

Also, from a strictly mechanical standpoint, I think the bracers underneath what I can only assume is the focus of the piece, are too thin. It would probably add a lot of visual strength to the piece if you had sturdy bracers underneath it. It would cause the viewer to think "wow, that central spiky part must really be heavy duty. Look at all the bracing needed to keep it in place." Right now it looks like it could be made of carbon fibre or something else ligthweight.

Anyway, just my suggestions. I think its a great model nonetheless.
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GLO-HE Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
excellent :thumbsup:
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GrahamSym Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014   Digital Artist
Thank you Gloria :hug:
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GLO-HE Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014
Heart  Welcome  Graham:hug:
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Myronavitch Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013
This is the one.  A prize winner for sure compared to the three lame works that did win.
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GrahamSym Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013   Digital Artist
Thank you kindly :)
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Myronavitch Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
My pleasure.
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nihilistic-hun Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013   Traditional Artist
Great entry :clap:
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GrahamSym Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013   Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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BionicKnees Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
I like this as it is. It is subtle and I really like the colors. It hints of the steampunk genre. This invites me to study it. This is my opinion though I am an outlier.
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GrahamSym Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013   Digital Artist
Thank you very much for your kind comments.
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